Write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best?
Is there constructive criticism that would help this group? What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?
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To be honest, I didn't know their were beavers in Ohio. The presentation was well put together with a wealth of facts. I did feel that Michael was hidden behind Skyler. But I enjoyed it. Great job!
ReplyDeleteOverall your presentation was good, you really knew your information! However at some points it was hard to hear you guys, sounded like mumbling from the back row! I learned that it was know for its waterfalls and as a get away with trails. One of my favorite things was beaver marsh, I found that to be really cool! Great job splitting up the speaking roles! Also I liked your visual aids to show us the park.
ReplyDeletei thought you guys did a good job of explaining the main animals and landmarks within the park. I think you guys might have moved through your slides maybe to fast you could have spent more time on the history and wildlife slides. Other than that I liked it a lot.
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job! I liked the sheet you gave us and since this is so close to home it I think means more to people. I would of just worked a little more on the visual part of the presentation but it wasn't bad. Great Job
ReplyDeleteI did not know that Cuyahoga Park was a national park. The park seems very pretty. I would have like to have heard a little more enthusiasm because it seemed like you guys were not that interested in what you were saying.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was really cool. I was interested to hear that Cuyahoga is the only National Park in Ohio because I never knew that. Also, I'm very interested in bald eagles so to hear about those was cool too. Overall great job. The only constructive criticism for you would be to sound more enthusiastic about your topic to get the listener interested and to have a more well thought out call to action. Other than that, great job!
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was superb and seemingly interesting. i like how you presented the information thoroughly and showing that video. One problem was that you did speak slow and not energetically while presenting the information. Overall, you did a great job and I liked your call to action at the end.
ReplyDeleteThere were many facts presented which allowed us to understand what was so special about Cuyahoga Valley. Throughout the presentation you guys tended to read off the slides which took away some of the effectiveness of your presentation. Your pictures were extremely effective in showing us the value of the place.
ReplyDeleteI loved your presentation. I thought it was very well organized and straight to the point. The handouts were also helpful and I plan on visiting the park one day. I had no idea this was a national park, I have heard of the park before but I thought it was only a state park. You both were well educated on the topic and thus the presentation flowed very easily. I liked how your call to action was brief and doable for everyone. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI honestly can say that I never knew where the park was located. I've never met anyone who's been there before. It definitely looks like a wonderful place to visit. you guys done a great job presenting it to the class. I felt that your presentation was well organized and it looks that you guys did do some practice before the initial presentation. If I were to recommend anything, I would say that in during your speech I would try focusing on using the space provided to you.
ReplyDeleteI loved this presentation! The pictures of the different sites were neat to look at, the video you played for us was a nice intro, and the background information was really neat. I was a little confused on the order you were presenting in when you started out, but after I realized that you were showing us various sights to see that gave some of the background history, I was good for the rest of the presentation.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you showed many different pictures of the park, it really helped show the true beauty of the park and all the different things in the park. Also I liked how you talked about the different animals in park. However, I felt sometimes you were reading right off the sides. Very good presentation.
ReplyDeleteit was very interest presentation, i never know Ohio have this nice national park.i like how you show to us different beautiful pictures.great job
ReplyDeleteThe pictures you showed of Cuyahoga were awesome! That alone made me want to go there. You guys did a great job of showing what Cuyahoga park is holding on to. Also, I never really knew it was a national park or where it was at, so that was great! Great job!
ReplyDeleteI think you guys did a good job. I really liked the pictures, it helped to show your point that the land/ scenery is what is being held onto. I think if you would have made it less factual about the park, and more factual about why the land is special, then what is being held onto might have been a little more clear. But overall you guys did a good job!
ReplyDeletegood share of the work and you guys had great visual aids. i don't think that you guys really had to improve upon anything. i didn't know that bad eagles nested in ohio, that's pretty cool.
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